无论是身处学校还是步入社会，大家都尝试过写作吧，借助写作也可以提高我们的语言组织能力。写范文的时候需要注意什么呢？有哪些格式需要注意呢？以下是我为大家搜集的优质范文，仅供参考，一起来看看吧
托福考试独立性写作 托福独立写作真题篇一
一篇作文的题目翻译成“命题”更加切题，同样一个命题，在不同的考生眼里可以develop 出不同的 thesis statement ( 中心论点)，每一篇托福独立性写作必须有一个中心论点，而且只有一个中心论点。通常，一篇独立性写作的中心论点分解成三个分论点：general idea (分论点)，由三个段落去论述;在段落中，分论点的称呼是 topic sentence (主题句);这三个包含有主题句的`段落合称为 body (正文)。正文中的三个分论点又由另外一个重要的作文要素 supporting details ( 支撑细节)去阐述。这便是托福独立性写作的核心三要素：中心论点，分论点和支撑细节。
◎ 以下是用 outline (大纲)的“作文”方法来展示上面这道作文题目的三个写作核心要素：
thesis statement ( 中心论点)：i learned a lot in introduction to art history, and it was inspiring.
正文段 1 topic sentence art history teaches you about more than art.
supporting details history, religion, literature, mythology
‚ i didn’t learn these things in my engineering classes.
正文段 2 topic sentence i had a very good teacher.
supporting details experienced and well known
‚ enthusiastic and inspiring
正文段 3 topic sentence i learned about the history of engineering.
supporting details buildings and bridges
‚ city planning
◎ 以下是一篇根据上面题目解析过程而写成的高分范文，供参考。
even though i am an engineer, i have to say that introduction to art history is the most important class i have ever taken. in this class i had the opportunity to learn new things, not only about art, but about other areas as well. i had a teacher who inspired me. and, believe it or not, it was important to my career as an engineer.
the course not only had interesting content but also a very inspiring teacher. my art history professor had a lot of enthusiasm for her subject, and she was able to convey that enthusiasm to her students. even though i am in a different field, this professor was a sort of role model for me. it is always inspiring to see people who love their work, no matter what it is. as i pursue my career as an engineer, i often think of this professor and hope that i bring the same enthusiasm to my own work.
art history should be a required course for everyone because it teachers you about so many things. i learned not only about art,but also about history, religion, literature, and mythology. these are subjects i didn’t learn about in my engineering classes, so it was a wonderful opportunity for me.
studying art history taught me some things about the history of engineering. in old paintings, i saw how buildings and bridges were built in the past. i saw how cities were planned. i realized that i could learn about my own field in different ways.
i learned a lot of things in my art history class. i learned about art ,about engineering, and about other things i hadn’t imagined. both the subject and the teacher inspired me to expand my mind. i an very glad that i took this class.
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